A good title for a comic (once again! lol)?

Shogun Panic, Beat the Clock, Bloodstained, The Hands that Were not meant to hold, or. Kuronekomaru(Kuro- Black, Neko-Cat, Maru -circle)or something maybe? Anyway you have a great plot but it needs a bit more structure. I think its maybe your character development? Well don't get me wrong you have a great main character, and she has a great motive to get revenge, but don't you think you should give your other charcters motive too? For instance make one have a similar reason as your main character like her love interest maybe? And maybe ones sibling or friend betrayed him and left them for the enemy so he's determined to meet the friend again? Lol also don't be afraid of making you characters to wild, but then make them too plain. Like your main character, I'm not to sure about her looks... Sounds a little weird(no offense) and Kang sounds a bit too naked when it comes to details. Maybe change your outlook a bit? Sorry if I offended you... Hope I helped!:)